I noticed a phrase that concerns me. When I recommended that you watch Wikizilla’s video for you know who, it was to give you the ropes. It occurs to me that so far, you’re kind of copying the video’s script down to the words. I would suggest for you to be careful. Wikizilla is kind of at its most biased and unprofessional when it comes to the YouTube video profiles. Besides, it is unideal to copy information down to the exact words because the point is essentially to paraphrase and redevelop the points so as to avoid plagiarism, or in this scenario, generic and unmotivated writing.
Topic on User talk:Dark Wavy
…………………💧……………… it isn’t just that one line alone. You’re essentially transcribing the video onto the page. I do have to commend you for your effort. Just be careful with your approach. If transcribing is a start in your eyes, don’t mind me. Progress is progress.
Yeah I had a feeling that when I finished it.. i essentially just coped the whole thing word to word.. I don't have the art book so it was a letdown for me but I knew someway I did it completely the wrong way.. I just couldn't pinpoint what until you told me this.. I might need to start over again..
if it's still there I'll get rid of most parts and just rewrite many of it to fit in for the true nature of the article.. good thing I still had it hidden since.. it wasn't done..
ok I rewrote the words and got rid of ones that didn't provide enough substance..
It looks like an improvement thus far. Keep up the good work. 👍🏻
Needs a little tweaking in the grammar.
you posted this just as when I just updated it to add in extra info and changed some of the wording
Huh. Good.
ok I finished GVK and The New Empire.
Honestly speaking, the section is smaller than I expected. Nonetheless, it seems sufficient. I suppose whether or not the admins do something will be the mark of approval.
there wasn't much that was mentioned for his model for GVK since it's mostly reused aside from adding in some stuff and it had been reused for MLOM both seasons and the first of the new empire so I just decided to talk about his evo design the most since there is a video about his design overall on YT that I did link here before.. it was very helpful to make me get started on his evo design and to know what I'm talking about.
Yes yes, but that’s not quite what jabbed at my expectations. I was honestly expecting the development section would pertain to a whole lot more than Godzilla's design.
I tried to but I did say before I couldn't find a way to get the art book so I can read the information in it since it was expensive so I had to go off of what I could write from videos to the best of ability.. if there is more information about it then I'll write it down asap but I am satisfied of how it came to be when I was done.
I See.