I'm still somewhat new around here so my apologies if i sounded a little rough but i do just have one simple question that i wanna ask. Les,what do you mean that i needed more "significant proofreading" (not trying to sound sarcastic) for the history part of kongs battle axe? I thought i explained it best for what really happened for the new empire, i made sure that the story that kongs battle axe goes through lines up perfectly in the story for movie so what's up with you getting rid of that? Im just simply curious about the change.
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I just read it, and it seems like it just needs some grammar fixes. The summary itself is pretty good, it just needs to be trimmed down a bit.
Ok I just went back and fixed some grammar issues and trimmed down some bits to have the history story to sound a little better.. tell me how it is now and see if there's still some errors.
Edit: Gone again?! What am i doing wrong?