Im honestly unsure what else the fog horn needs from what im reading everything looks grammatically correct and that it covers the whole story.
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Definitely not grammatically correct. There are horrible run-on sentences such as:
"Johnny asks McDunn if he is wanting to show him the schools of fish, McDunn replies telling him no and that he had held off telling him about this believing he would be seen as daft for tonight was when “it” came as it came the previous year as he refuses to go into further detail and tells Johnny to simply wait to see it for himself."
i legitimately have no idea where it begins or where to end it i seriously need software or something for this i really do want to help with that type of thing but i just seem to not be cut out for it at all.
There’s software like Grammarly, or for run-on sentences there’s sentencecheckup.com
Someone who has read the book needs to clean it up, because the current description is unintelligible.
http://sheffieldanimals.group.shef.ac.uk/wp-content/uploads/2015/11/THE_FOG_HORN.pdf
heres the story btw
i already just posted a PDF of the whole story.
