I just wanted to tell you that there's a few more pages about prehistoric animals that could use some of your rewrites and that you missed. They are:
- Diplodocus,
- Elasmosaurus,
- Styracosaurus.
There's also some sandbox pages that could use these, too (just go the the Catagories section and click on "Dinosaurs"):
- Plesiosaurus,
- Rhamphorhynchus,
- Velociraptor,
- Dilophosaurus.
Just thought you'd like to know.